I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
For those encountering the issue with the Options screen: Unfortunately, we haven’t been able to reproduce it on our devices, but we're actively working on a fix. An updated v0.3 build that addresses this bug will be released soon.
If your game's working fine, you don't need to do anything.
Is it normal to get an Emma scene (on the parking lot) after Grace says her goodbye? It kinda feels very out of the place, and I didn't even tell her that I'd "help her with anything" when I was serving her the previous day.
Like the game. But i have a feeling all those animations or non-default menus and so on take too much time from actual game making, since there is only a single update in a span of year.
It happened only once. This update was larger than the initial version and update v0.2. Stay tuned, and let's count together how long the development of the next update will take.
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兄弟們我發誓這是最好玩、品質最高遊戲！
Thanks!
非常好玩，剧情线很喜欢，希望赶快出完全部的
Glad you enjoyed it
I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
Thanks for the detailed feedback! The writing issue is already being worked on, and the fix will be included in v0.4
Game is very good, found one bug in 0.3
When you go to the gallery for Lillian no music plays. This happens only in her gallery
I'll check it out, thanks for the feedback!
Can't wait in summer
The game is very good, the story was very good, I liked it, please bring the new episode
I'll try to finish it this summer.
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
by far the best game of this kind that ive played. need the next update, i went through the whole thing in one day
Thank you!
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I'll keep doing my best, thank you!
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
¿Español?
Glad you liked it, thanks!
I don't know if this is selfish enough but please can you add Indonesian?🥺
If I get the chance, I'll add it.
好游戏，继续加油，也希望0.4版本能做出来
Thanks! v0.4 is currently in development.
Of several other games, this is the best for Android, especially with the character voices
this game have Chinese translate? owo
Yeah, you can switch the language in options.
thx
感情线有点太随意了，说上就上，不过能接受，剧情结构写的非常好，建模还可以，总体来说非常棒的一部作品，作者加油加油加油👍
Glad you liked it!
Amazing! The writing in the new update have incredible improvement compared to previous updates, everything is perfect now
Happy to see you noticed that, thanks!
快更新吧，搞个赞助的也行。这游戏真的做的特别好。容入我心。
Doing my best.
Man I love and worry about May so much... Hope she will be alright in next update.
As a Virgin Hunt.... I mean As a Virgin Prioritizer I would like to know if there's a Virgin here.
There is.
excellent animation.the best game i have ever seen.like watching movies.looking forward to the next update.
Glad you liked it.
yeah ok, but can we bang May?
Patience, friend. A little patience.
Yoo, I really really love the new update😍😍, looking forward to the next update😁✌🏻
WE MUST PROTECT MAY AT ALL COSTS (too adorable)
just started the game looking forward to it
Amazing game! Minami ❤️
Thanks!
作者您好，希望您能看看中文翻译中的错误问题，您能解决吗
建议去作者的DC服务器反馈
When is 0.4 coming out?
Prolly next year HAHAHA
I plan to finish it this summer.
试试看点ignore（无视）
我用手机玩，但是一直提示错误，无视也没用
不，这没有帮助，我的任何操作都会是错误的提示
Fixed. 21.01.2025
救命JM
Mega doesn't load completely, can we get a Mediafire link? I just prefer that.
Try Google Drive or PixelDrain.
游戏很好，但如果在游戏的选项上有提示的话可能会更好🥰，你知道的，对拥有选择困难症的人来说，二选一，三选一，通常是困难的😂，另外，可以为所有的cg装配上语音吗？这或许是刚需！🤧
配音不大可能，找配音员很贵的
的确如此，但我现在才发现原来这游戏cg是有声音的😂
哈哈哈我来配
For those encountering the issue with the Options screen:
Unfortunately, we haven’t been able to reproduce it on our devices, but we're actively working on a fix. An updated v0.3 build that addresses this bug will be released soon.
If your game's working fine, you don't need to do anything.
Is it normal to get an Emma scene (on the parking lot) after Grace says her goodbye? It kinda feels very out of the place, and I didn't even tell her that I'd "help her with anything" when I was serving her the previous day.
Thanks for your feedback, I'll check it out.
Like the game. But i have a feeling all those animations or non-default menus and so on take too much time from actual game making, since there is only a single update in a span of year.
It happened only once. This update was larger than the initial version and update v0.2. Stay tuned, and let's count together how long the development of the next update will take.
This homepage is by far the most creative of them all—it's packed with soo much style and personality.
Thank you!
The Chinese translation cannot work.it shows cannot find the font 平方张亚玲黑方体.ttf
我们的情况是一样的。
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
Exception: Could not find font '平方张亚玲黑方体.ttf'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "tl/schinese/cdr_1.rpyc", line 139, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2579, in execute
File "renpy/ast.py", line 621, in execute
File "renpy/exports\sayexports.py", line 132, in say
File "renpy/character.py", line 1455, in __call__
File "renpy/character.py", line 1106, in do_display
File "renpy/character.py", line 803, in display_say
File "renpy/ui.py", line 301, in interact
File "renpy/display\core.py", line 2215, in interact
File "renpy/display\core.py", line 2879, in interact_core
File "renpy/display\core.py", line 1381, in draw_screen
File "render.pyx", line 486, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 900, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\transition.py", line 384, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 900, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 900, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\screen.py", line 752, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 900, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1457, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 900, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display\layout.py", line 1457, in render
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 260, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/text\text.py", line 2600, in render
File "renpy/text\text.py", line 767, in __init__
File "renpy/text\text.py", line 340, in glyphs
File "renpy/text\font.py", line 745, in get_font
File "renpy/text\font.py", line 673, in load_face
Exception: Could not find font '平方张亚玲黑方体.ttf'.
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yes! I am encounting this question now.I try to download again, but it doesn't work
GOATED UPDDDD BRO 😭
Thank you so much ❤️
只要中文框架对话就会异常，用英文却没问题，拜托修复这个bug
对于这种用renpy制作的黄油游戏，中文对话一直会有BUG
全是bug
一直有异常啊，等了这么久体验真的难受，一点都玩不了