I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this game. On one hand, the animation is exquisite, the UI is clean and streamlined, and the sound is magnificent (although I usually play these games without voice, so I can't comment on the voice acting).
On the other, the plot and dialogue are kind of ham-fisted, like it's been translated badly. It's kind of a slog to actually get through the story - I made it up to right after the altercation on the rooftop before deciding I couldn't muddle through any more.
Great start, but the services of a translator or proofreader might be in order.
Damn, Lilith or the blonde woman has experience? I am invested in the story even tho there's not much sex happening and also because the animation is top tier.
Told yah my theory is correct She has experience or not a virgin anymore but there's still that Step Sis you know. Anyway GIVE ME BACK MY CALL OF DUTY ACCOUNT!
Just finished playing for the first time. Animations and UI are top of the line. Glad to hear that the writing is being worked on, could easily be a 10/10 with a slight adjustment. Looking forward to future releases!
The animations in this game blew my mind, and I'm quite intrigued in the storyline. I've just finished what the current version has to offer. Keep it up! I admire your hard work, just imagine the time, the struggles and the passion you have for you to make this game.
(I apologize for my poor English, I recently joined your Discord server.)
Maya is an incredible beauty.And overall the game is incredible.I think you can cut down on unnecessary animations to speed up the production of the game
I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
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may is "stepsister" but she is mc's big sister hay young sister. please
Patreon completely disallows full-incest so there was probably a change at some point and that detail was overlooked
mega和pix版本是什么意思？
非常赞，期待后面更新
alguna vez estará en español
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this game. On one hand, the animation is exquisite, the UI is clean and streamlined, and the sound is magnificent (although I usually play these games without voice, so I can't comment on the voice acting).
On the other, the plot and dialogue are kind of ham-fisted, like it's been translated badly. It's kind of a slog to actually get through the story - I made it up to right after the altercation on the rooftop before deciding I couldn't muddle through any more.
Great start, but the services of a translator or proofreader might be in order.
How is this game free? For real I think I never saw a porn game with such quality, props to the dev omg, I'm so hyped for the next update
Need Indonesian translate
Hi! I can't wait any longer. How's it going?
yeah, pretty long without updates(
Hello, author. Is your team currently working on any other games?
Hi! Unfortunately, no. I'm only working on this game.
Damn, Lilith or the blonde woman has experience? I am invested in the story even tho there's not much sex happening and also because the animation is top tier.
Lillian? If you made that choice at the hotel, then yes. You'll find out more about her in the upcoming update.
Nice, it's been a while since I play this game (around 1 month ago and 1 week).
Told yah my theory is correct She has experience or not a virgin anymore but there's still that Step Sis you know. Anyway GIVE ME BACK MY CALL OF DUTY ACCOUNT!
作者，第4季什么时候做好啊
If all goes well, it should be out this summer.
Will there be more horror plots in the future?
Yep, definitely.
I really like the horror plot in it. It feels really thrilling.
期待更新，我心中第一名的遊戲！
Glad you liked it!
Looking up to updates
This game have quite good storyline
About Scene you give your own opinion cause different ppl has different taste.
That's all in my opinion thx.
Waiting for the new version
Just finished playing for the first time. Animations and UI are top of the line. Glad to hear that the writing is being worked on, could easily be a 10/10 with a slight adjustment. Looking forward to future releases!
I'll keep working to make it even better. Thanks!
The animations in this game blew my mind, and I'm quite intrigued in the storyline. I've just finished what the current version has to offer. Keep it up! I admire your hard work, just imagine the time, the struggles and the passion you have for you to make this game.
(I apologize for my poor English, I recently joined your Discord server.)
Thank you!
这算是我近期玩过最好的游戏了，没有之一。人物形象很好看，故事也很不错，动画也相当出色。希望作者继续加油，继续更新，完善这个游戏🫶🏻
Glad you enjoyed it!
Maya is an incredible beauty.And overall the game is incredible.I think you can cut down on unnecessary animations to speed up the production of the game
Possibly so. I'm trying to hold myself back from adding even more. Thanks!
Hello, what is the percentage of production of the new version?
Hello, the last post about it was 5 days ago. I'll post a new report once I've made more progress.
OK, thank you.
I like this game very much.There should not be a story of NTR, right?
Never. There will never be NTR in this game.
❤️
It's just that I've played the best quality game, and I'm willing to spend money on it, and the author is looking forward to the next version.
Thank you so much! Stay tuned, I think you'll love what's coming next.
作者打算后续会出到0.几版本
Can't say exactly how many. It all depends on the size of each update.
这在走剧情中添加了自由度，而且画质非常的有中式风格真的很好
目前3D里最喜欢的 黑马
Glad you liked it!
支持中文吗？作者
有中文翻译
有没有可能他有中文的？他还有繁体字。简体字和繁体字都有。
para cuando el español?
When I get the chance. I'll consider adding machine translation for Spanish in 0.4.
大概还有多久能玩到下一章，太好玩了
A few months, around 4-5. Stay tuned!
兄弟們我發誓這是最好玩、品質最高遊戲！
Thanks!
非常好玩，剧情线很喜欢，希望赶快出完全部的
Glad you enjoyed it
I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
Thanks for the detailed feedback! The writing issue is already being worked on, and the fix will be included in v0.4
That's amazing news, looking forward to it!
Game is very good, found one bug in 0.3
When you go to the gallery for Lillian no music plays. This happens only in her gallery
I'll check it out, thanks for the feedback!
Can't wait in summer
The game is very good, the story was very good, I liked it, please bring the new episode
I'll try to finish it this summer.
We will wait for that.
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
by far the best game of this kind that ive played. need the next update, i went through the whole thing in one day
Thank you!
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I'll keep doing my best, thank you!
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
¿Español?
viva españa
Glad you liked it, thanks!
I don't know if this is selfish enough but please can you add Indonesian?🥺
If I get the chance, I'll add it.