I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
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Hello, what is the percentage of production of the new version?
Hello, the last post about it was 5 days ago. I'll post a new report once I've made more progress.
OK, thank you.
I like this game very much.There should not be a story of NTR, right?
Never. There will never be NTR in this game.
❤️
It's just that I've played the best quality game, and I'm willing to spend money on it, and the author is looking forward to the next version.
Thank you so much! Stay tuned, I think you'll love what's coming next.
作者打算后续会出到0.几版本
Can't say exactly how many. It all depends on the size of each update.
这在走剧情中添加了自由度,而且画质非常的有中式风格真的很好
目前3D里最喜欢的 黑马
Glad you liked it!
支持中文吗?作者
有中文翻译
para cuando el español?
When I get the chance. I'll consider adding machine translation for Spanish in 0.4.
大概还有多久能玩到下一章,太好玩了
A few months, around 4-5. Stay tuned!
兄弟們我發誓這是最好玩、品質最高遊戲!
Thanks!
非常好玩,剧情线很喜欢,希望赶快出完全部的
Glad you enjoyed it
I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
Thanks for the detailed feedback! The writing issue is already being worked on, and the fix will be included in v0.4
That's amazing news, looking forward to it!
Game is very good, found one bug in 0.3
When you go to the gallery for Lillian no music plays. This happens only in her gallery
I'll check it out, thanks for the feedback!
Can't wait in summer
The game is very good, the story was very good, I liked it, please bring the new episode
I'll try to finish it this summer.
We will wait for that.
That bartender should of ate a bullet the second he said he added the extra ingredient... Pretty sure the high profile club pushing drugs would cover it up.
by far the best game of this kind that ive played. need the next update, i went through the whole thing in one day
Thank you!
i can say that this game is really good i can see your bright future with this game i kinda like how u add many Animation never seen that many before yea i can see how much effort u put in this game so keep going ;)
I'll keep doing my best, thank you!
I just finished this game, saying that its amazing would fall short and wouldnt do justice to it. One of the best games i have played in years. Thanks for this masterpiece, ill be waiting for upcoming updates.
¿Español?
viva españa
Glad you liked it, thanks!
I don't know if this is selfish enough but please can you add Indonesian?🥺
If I get the chance, I'll add it.
好游戏,继续加油,也希望0.4版本能做出来
Thanks! v0.4 is currently in development.
Of several other games, this is the best for Android, especially with the character voices
this game have Chinese translate? owo
Yeah, you can switch the language in options.
thx
感情线有点太随意了,说上就上,不过能接受,剧情结构写的非常好,建模还可以,总体来说非常棒的一部作品,作者加油加油加油👍
Glad you liked it!
Amazing! The writing in the new update have incredible improvement compared to previous updates, everything is perfect now
Happy to see you noticed that, thanks!
快更新吧,搞个赞助的也行。这游戏真的做的特别好。容入我心。
Doing my best.
Man I love and worry about May so much... Hope she will be alright in next update.
As a Virgin Hunt.... I mean As a Virgin Prioritizer I would like to know if there's a Virgin here.
There is.
excellent animation.the best game i have ever seen.like watching movies.looking forward to the next update.
Glad you liked it.
yeah ok, but can we bang May?
Patience, friend. A little patience.
Yoo, I really really love the new update😍😍, looking forward to the next update😁✌🏻
WE MUST PROTECT MAY AT ALL COSTS (too adorable)
just started the game looking forward to it
Amazing game! Minami ❤️
Thanks!
作者您好,希望您能看看中文翻译中的错误问题,您能解决吗
建议去作者的DC服务器反馈
When is 0.4 coming out?
Prolly next year HAHAHA
I plan to finish it this summer.
试试看点ignore(无视)
我用手机玩,但是一直提示错误,无视也没用
不,这没有帮助,我的任何操作都会是错误的提示
Fixed. 21.01.2025
救命JM
Mega doesn't load completely, can we get a Mediafire link? I just prefer that.
Try Google Drive or PixelDrain.
游戏很好,但如果在游戏的选项上有提示的话可能会更好🥰,你知道的,对拥有选择困难症的人来说,二选一,三选一,通常是困难的😂,另外,可以为所有的cg装配上语音吗?这或许是刚需!🤧
配音不大可能,找配音员很贵的
的确如此,但我现在才发现原来这游戏cg是有声音的😂
哈哈哈我来配