I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
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兄弟們我發誓這是最好玩、品質最高遊戲！
Thanks!
非常好玩，剧情线很喜欢，希望赶快出完全部的
Glad you enjoyed it
I only played the first two and a half days. I have to say in terms of production quality this game is insane. Very good renders & animations, and boy are there a lot of animations. For idle npcs, camera pans, combat moves, you spared no expense. In that regard, I don't know any AVN that is better than this one.
But -- all this might not really matter since the writing is quite bad. It's the weakest link in the chain. First of all, there are some weird wordings, which might be just a lack of English proficiency. But also, no matter in which language, quite a few conversations or MC throughts are just weird or not properly set up.
When I look at how the game (and even this webpage) is polished, it seems like you have a lot of development resources at your disposal. I strongly suggest you to divert some of them to overhaul your writing. Everything about this AVN is S tier except the writing, which is the one thing you aren't allowed to mess up.
And lastly, while all that polish is really impressive, it could also be considered wasteful. An AVN is a marathon, but it seems like you're starting it with a sprint. Your final product is only worth a fraction of its potential if you can't finish it. I've seen quite a few awesome AVNs fail and it pains me, so please think about the long run too!
i fully agree with this, what you've got so far is VERY high quality, the writing could use some work, i'm surprised this hsnt blown up yet on itch. seriously good work though dev, amazing work
Thanks for the detailed feedback! The writing issue is already being worked on, and the fix will be included in v0.4
That's amazing news, looking forward to it!
Game is very good, found one bug in 0.3
When you go to the gallery for Lillian no music plays. This happens only in her gallery
I'll check it out, thanks for the feedback!
Can't wait in summer
The game is very good, the story was very good, I liked it, please bring the new episode
I'll try to finish it this summer.