The game is great, but the animations often lag, even though my PC isn't low-end.
Also, can the color of the main girl's eyes be adjusted a little? Other than Izumi, they all seem to have colorful eyes, but it's too dark to notice.
And finally, some dialogues don't make that much sense for example why the MC didn't ask the teacher how she knows about this whole supernatural stuff and who is she.
On Windows 10 or 11, it should work fine. Try updating your drivers and closing other background applications. As for the eye colors, for the most unsuccessful renders, that aspect is almost being reworked. Regarding Minami, her previous job was mentioned at one of the events. Thanks!
The storyline looks promising and the animations are one of the best I've seen in an AVN. But why are the updates so slow? It's been almost an year since the game released and there's only an hour worth of content atm
That was the best-animated game I have ever played. Moreover, there was a really good story, and literally perfect graphics. Thanks for creating sth like that. This is my honor to be able to play it dude
Cool animations. Great introduction. Smooth gameplay and very good models and textures. I love the mc and his model love the atmosphere and the script/plot. You can see that the author/creator put so much work into this.
Bu thr way please add events and route on Leah shes cute
first of all i really like how smooth is the animation not to mention the game design.. Despite the game is less than 1gb and has lot of content... And the game ui specially the quick save and quick load cuz there's so many choices that affects the plot of the game but i thought there's gonna be other ending but i guess not.. well it's only 0.2v soo i hope they add more things in the game.. the game is so good ngl
and sorry im not really good bout giving a opinion or review but i appreciate the work
After the teacher checked the note with that bluelight and that line showed up I managed to read it but I couldn't BUT I was bored so I decided to read it at any costs so I spent the next 3 hours in editing and searching and at the end I was able to read it,I got a Coordinate,I won't say the specific coordinate for privacy but it's between (35N,139E).So the matter is!!.is that your location or it's just a random coordinate?????
This has great potential to become one of those greatest AVNs. But nearly a year of waiting for an hour of playtime can erode patience (based on the current version, there may be more playtime in the coming 0.3v). Of course, great works take time. You should always keep your own pace, or maybe find more people to work with lol. Btw really love this h5 home page.
it's good, very good. But the dialogue seems off a little bit. I mean our teacher literally pulled up and tell us that she know about our power and somehow we don't even question it. Also it's kinda random for Dai and the other guy to suddenly be all buddy with us. I mean it would had been better if the topic of money was brought by maybe them hearing gossip about our financial situation or some shit? Regardless the game deserve praises for the elite animation and transition but have setback because of its dialogue, it's understandable though it's hard to write story afterall. Overall solid 7.5/10
I feel like the storyline is just starting but I can say this is one of the best VN I've ever played. All from animations to characters, it was different from others I've seen. The story is very interesting so far and I can't wait for the continuation of this. Some things can be improved like dialogues, but considering it as a developing game, It's very well done. If you don't mind asking, will this game be always free or maybe in the future you will add a payment to play it? If it will have, how much will it be?
The animations were unexpected, smooth and surprisingly appealing, and they're top-notch, especially for a VN. I would've almost said I was watching a movie.
This brings me to my second point. It's very linear, more akin to a movie than a game. All the choices I have seen in 0.2 feel purely cosmetic, with very little to no impact on the story. If that's what you aim for, then there's no problem.
For the third point, I have to criticise the writing. The content, story and pieces of lore are very interesting, however, all immersion is broken by the phrasing of some lines. To be honest, some of them were painful to read. It was not really about orthography or grammar as much as it was about the structuring of sentences and expressions. If you're interested, I can look again when I have time and write down the worst ones.
The fourth and last point: characters. It's too soon to say whether they're good or bad, hollow or well-made, but their dialogues are... generally bad. Many lines are dry, many reactions are weird and many dialogues seem so emotionless, or full of fake emotion, that I wouldn't be surprised to see it was two AIs doing the talking.
The game is good and has much potential, but as with any game at the beginning of the road, it needs time, effort and polish.
For me the most immersion breaking dialogue is when the MC starts using "m'lady" talk, made worse when the other characters respond favorably to it. maximum cringe. I hope that isn't part of the dialogue you found off-putting, or i may pass on this entirely.
Hello author, after playing it, I think your game is great and I would be happy to provide Chinese translations for your subsequent updates.
This is the Chinese translation file for version 0.2. Because the game comes with font files that do not support Chinese, this translation currently lacks the specified font files..
A native Chinese speaker is currently translating the game, and the translation is almost ready. We will consider your option. Thank you so much for your offer!
Love the overall story and the visuals are next level, but the dialogue ranges from OK at best to unbearable - typos, missing words, weird syntax, all of that really brings the experience down. In my opinion this should be your main focus going forward, as it's pretty much impossible for a game with poor english to get big.
Oh boy this avn is good, the fact that is almost 90% of animation is strange initially but after a while it's really enjoyable but i guess that's the motive of such long dev time :D The story so far feel good, even if in some places the dialogues are a little ambigous. The LI are all pretty so far! GJ Dev!
I like the models, the horror elements, and the scenes. It's pretty good so far, though my biggest gripe would be on the dialogue. A lot of it is unrealistic and strange, which takes away from me getting immersed in the plot. Still, it's pretty early on, so I think you can improve from here. Good job so far!
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The game is great, but the animations often lag, even though my PC isn't low-end.
Also, can the color of the main girl's eyes be adjusted a little? Other than Izumi, they all seem to have colorful eyes, but it's too dark to notice.
And finally, some dialogues don't make that much sense for example why the MC didn't ask the teacher how she knows about this whole supernatural stuff and who is she.
On Windows 10 or 11, it should work fine. Try updating your drivers and closing other background applications. As for the eye colors, for the most unsuccessful renders, that aspect is almost being reworked. Regarding Minami, her previous job was mentioned at one of the events. Thanks!
How do I fix this error?
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 284, in script
python:
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "C:\Users\levis\Downloads\OG\CityDevilRestart-0.2-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 275, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Users\levis\Downloads\OG\CityDevilRestart-0.2-pc\renpy\main.py", line 670, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Users\levis\Downloads\OG\CityDevilRestart-0.2-pc\renpy\main.py", line 144, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Users\levis\Downloads\OG\CityDevilRestart-0.2-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 953, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 284, in script
python:
File "C:\Users\levis\Downloads\OG\CityDevilRestart-0.2-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1013, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'start'.
Windows-10-10.0.22000 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.1.23060707
Tue Apr 2 23:44:59 2024
It seems like you have a modified file, or it was corrupted. Did you get the game here?
yes I got it in this site, through the download link via mega
I rechecked, and it works. Check the integrity of the game files and get the game from another mirror. Try PixelDrain
is there any may Scene (like BJ or something ) in the next update?
Can't say. But there will be enough hot scenes with others.
The storyline looks promising and the animations are one of the best I've seen in an AVN. But why are the updates so slow? It's been almost an year since the game released and there's only an hour worth of content atm
Thanks! It takes up a lot of my time. I can't make it any faster.
下次更新是什么时候啊
Around September for v0.3
September 3
That was the best-animated game I have ever played. Moreover, there was a really good story, and literally perfect graphics. Thanks for creating sth like that. This is my honor to be able to play it dude
Glad you liked it ^^ Thank you very much!
Cool animations. Great introduction. Smooth gameplay and very good models and textures. I love the mc and his model love the atmosphere and the script/plot. You can see that the author/creator put so much work into this.
Bu thr way please add events and route on Leah shes cute
She's not one of LI, but when the right moment in the storyline arrives, you'll have the chance to interact with her more. Thank you very much!
Dude i really can t describe how good is this game
Thank you!
first of all i really like how smooth is the animation not to mention the game design.. Despite the game is less than 1gb and has lot of content... And the game ui specially the quick save and quick load cuz there's so many choices that affects the plot of the game but i thought there's gonna be other ending but i guess not.. well it's only 0.2v soo i hope they add more things in the game.. the game is so good ngl
and sorry im not really good bout giving a opinion or review but i appreciate the work
Thank you for the feedback! Stay tuned!
anyone know how to fix this i think there's supposed to have a question but there's no option...
Tap the milk or the black can. Later, I'll make different buttons for this choice. Sorry for the inconvenience.
thanks already finished the game
After the teacher checked the note with that bluelight and that line showed up I managed to read it but I couldn't BUT I was bored so I decided to read it at any costs so I spent the next 3 hours in editing and searching and at the end I was able to read it,I got a Coordinate,I won't say the specific coordinate for privacy but it's between (35N,139E).So the matter is!!.is that your location or it's just a random coordinate?????
Let's keep that a secret, haha. It's not a random coordinate.
This has great potential to become one of those greatest AVNs. But nearly a year of waiting for an hour of playtime can erode patience (based on the current version, there may be more playtime in the coming 0.3v). Of course, great works take time. You should always keep your own pace, or maybe find more people to work with lol. Btw really love this h5 home page.
I'll try my best. Thank you!
It's a very good game. This animation and plot is a great. And i wanna ask, when will be the next update and Russian? Thank you in advance
0.3 will be completed around September, possibly earlier. Russian is included in one of the upcoming patches. Thank you!
OK, thank you for you reply. Good luck! <3
Good luck...
it's good, very good. But the dialogue seems off a little bit. I mean our teacher literally pulled up and tell us that she know about our power and somehow we don't even question it. Also it's kinda random for Dai and the other guy to suddenly be all buddy with us. I mean it would had been better if the topic of money was brought by maybe them hearing gossip about our financial situation or some shit? Regardless the game deserve praises for the elite animation and transition but have setback because of its dialogue, it's understandable though it's hard to write story afterall. Overall solid 7.5/10
With time, many shortcomings will be fixed. Thanks for the feedback!
Can I ask what apps do you use to make these?
wonderful game！
Thank you!
How many people and working on this
Just me. But one person is helping translate this game into Chinese.
Hmm how long is the playtime now currently? How many words it have as of now? I want to play but I don't want to be cliffhanged so yeah..
About an hour and 17,000+ words.
I feel like the storyline is just starting but I can say this is one of the best VN I've ever played. All from animations to characters, it was different from others I've seen. The story is very interesting so far and I can't wait for the continuation of this. Some things can be improved like dialogues, but considering it as a developing game, It's very well done. If you don't mind asking, will this game be always free or maybe in the future you will add a payment to play it? If it will have, how much will it be?
I'm glad to hear that, thanks! This game will always be free.
I'll be quick and honest:
The animations were unexpected, smooth and surprisingly appealing, and they're top-notch, especially for a VN. I would've almost said I was watching a movie.
This brings me to my second point. It's very linear, more akin to a movie than a game. All the choices I have seen in 0.2 feel purely cosmetic, with very little to no impact on the story. If that's what you aim for, then there's no problem.
For the third point, I have to criticise the writing. The content, story and pieces of lore are very interesting, however, all immersion is broken by the phrasing of some lines. To be honest, some of them were painful to read. It was not really about orthography or grammar as much as it was about the structuring of sentences and expressions. If you're interested, I can look again when I have time and write down the worst ones.
The fourth and last point: characters. It's too soon to say whether they're good or bad, hollow or well-made, but their dialogues are... generally bad. Many lines are dry, many reactions are weird and many dialogues seem so emotionless, or full of fake emotion, that I wouldn't be surprised to see it was two AIs doing the talking.
The game is good and has much potential, but as with any game at the beginning of the road, it needs time, effort and polish.
For me the most immersion breaking dialogue is when the MC starts using "m'lady" talk, made worse when the other characters respond favorably to it. maximum cringe. I hope that isn't part of the dialogue you found off-putting, or i may pass on this entirely.
I'm sorry this spoiled your gaming experience. I'll be improving the game as much as possible. Please share what annoys you the most, and I'll fix it.
very cool
Thanks!
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加油！非常优秀的游戏，动态图的镜头运用得很不错，轻轻的呻吟声很加分，相信你到v0.7版本后游戏的排名和赞助都会很高的。
能不能增加人民币或港币的赞助途径，中国区都预测你的游戏会火。中文，韩文，俄文，翻译器能加上去更完美。
I hope so, thanks! Hong Kong Dollar is accepted on Patreon. Chinese and Russian will be in the next update. Other languages may be added later.
This is definitely one of the high quality AVN's out there, I really like your top-tier animations! Hoping to see more in the future! 😁
Thanks mate, I'm cooking the update. Stay tuned!
Will be waiting for v0.3 cuz I'm done playing v0.2
Hello author, after playing it, I think your game is great and I would be happy to provide Chinese translations for your subsequent updates.
This is the Chinese translation file for version 0.2. Because the game comes with font files that do not support Chinese, this translation currently lacks the specified font files..
Chinese translation
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@Sabirow
A native Chinese speaker is currently translating the game, and the translation is almost ready. We will consider your option. Thank you so much for your offer!
作者可以回我一下吗，中国的网站被管控了我下载不了，可以加我好友传过来吗
When may sex scen?
It won't be soon, but you'll like it!
The download for Win with Google work?
If you have issues, try MEGA or PixelDrain.
Bro, even though it's still version 0.2 it already became one of the best avn for me. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.
Thank you! ^^
most well made web page for a game on here. extremely distinct. good job to whoever made it
Glad you liked it. Thank you
Love the overall story and the visuals are next level, but the dialogue ranges from OK at best to unbearable - typos, missing words, weird syntax, all of that really brings the experience down. In my opinion this should be your main focus going forward, as it's pretty much impossible for a game with poor english to get big.
Thanks. I will work on this.
Hi, when will the translation be in Russian??
Hello! In future updates.
спасибо
'69 SS. Tiny brain happ
Nah this AVN is different
This game is next-gen.
什么时候能出一下中文
In future updates. It will take some time for this.
什么时候更新0.3啊 迫不及待
I can't say for sure right now. Around 6-8 months.
好久呀，我以為 3-4 個月差不多了
Oh boy this avn is good, the fact that is almost 90% of animation is strange initially but after a while it's really enjoyable but i guess that's the motive of such long dev time :D
The story so far feel good, even if in some places the dialogues are a little ambigous. The LI are all pretty so far! GJ Dev!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
I like the models, the horror elements, and the scenes. It's pretty good so far, though my biggest gripe would be on the dialogue. A lot of it is unrealistic and strange, which takes away from me getting immersed in the plot. Still, it's pretty early on, so I think you can improve from here. Good job so far!
I will try to improve the current shortcomings. Thank you!
Is it possible to avoid prostitution in this update?
I will release a minor update with an avoid route in a while. Stay tuned!
I guess none of the whores is a LI.
They are side characters with whom you can engage.
You can tap 'Exit' after the first climax or wait for an update where you can choose not to visit this club.
I'm more in favor of waiting and not going to the brothel
还没有更新吗
v0.2 available now, enjoy!