I feel like the storyline is just starting but I can say this is one of the best VN I've ever played. All from animations to characters, it was different from others I've seen. The story is very interesting so far and I can't wait for the continuation of this. Some things can be improved like dialogues, but considering it as a developing game, It's very well done. If you don't mind asking, will this game be always free or maybe in the future you will add a payment to play it? If it will have, how much will it be?
The animations were unexpected, smooth and surprisingly appealing, and they're top-notch, especially for a VN. I would've almost said I was watching a movie.
This brings me to my second point. It's very linear, more akin to a movie than a game. All the choices I have seen in 0.2 feel purely cosmetic, with very little to no impact on the story. If that's what you aim for, then there's no problem.
For the third point, I have to criticise the writing. The content, story and pieces of lore are very interesting, however, all immersion is broken by the phrasing of some lines. To be honest, some of them were painful to read. It was not really about orthography or grammar as much as it was about the structuring of sentences and expressions. If you're interested, I can look again when I have time and write down the worst ones.
The fourth and last point: characters. It's too soon to say whether they're good or bad, hollow or well-made, but their dialogues are... generally bad. Many lines are dry, many reactions are weird and many dialogues seem so emotionless, or full of fake emotion, that I wouldn't be surprised to see it was two AIs doing the talking.
The game is good and has much potential, but as with any game at the beginning of the road, it needs time, effort and polish.
For me the most immersion breaking dialogue is when the MC starts using "m'lady" talk, made worse when the other characters respond favorably to it. maximum cringe. I hope that isn't part of the dialogue you found off-putting, or i may pass on this entirely.
Hello author, after playing it, I think your game is great and I would be happy to provide Chinese translations for your subsequent updates.
This is the Chinese translation file for version 0.2. Because the game comes with font files that do not support Chinese, this translation currently lacks the specified font files..
A native Chinese speaker is currently translating the game, and the translation is almost ready. We will consider your option. Thank you so much for your offer!
Love the overall story and the visuals are next level, but the dialogue ranges from OK at best to unbearable - typos, missing words, weird syntax, all of that really brings the experience down. In my opinion this should be your main focus going forward, as it's pretty much impossible for a game with poor english to get big.
Oh boy this avn is good, the fact that is almost 90% of animation is strange initially but after a while it's really enjoyable but i guess that's the motive of such long dev time :D The story so far feel good, even if in some places the dialogues are a little ambigous. The LI are all pretty so far! GJ Dev!
I like the models, the horror elements, and the scenes. It's pretty good so far, though my biggest gripe would be on the dialogue. A lot of it is unrealistic and strange, which takes away from me getting immersed in the plot. Still, it's pretty early on, so I think you can improve from here. Good job so far!
Happy 2024, I have carefully studied your 0.11 work and would like to share some personal insights. I hope you can take a closer look when you have time, as it may inspire you.
① Story and plot of the game: If you have your own considerations for the game outline, it is not recommended (I hope there is more suspense or surprises in the plot, so that players have a feeling of remembering the updates in the following text)
② Image quality optimization: With watery eye expressions and red nipples, make sure to focus on details.
The focus is on the use of shots in dynamic images, such as close-up shots of characters stretching or shifting up and down in close range, especially in dynamic images. The use of shots with horizontal rotation and forward and backward translation in capturing dynamic images (as I have posted on the forum) Eternum The horizontally rotating camera in the pornographic animation showcases the female character's body shape, chest swaying trajectory, and hip swaying trajectory, with over a few hundred comments
③ An excellent pornographic game must have a soft moan and a soft panting voice over.
I hope your game can rank in the top ten after 0.6, come on! I think the game you made has the potential to become an excellent work!
The CG capture of dynamic images must have a gradient of horizontal rotation and stretching of the lens, as well as a moaning sound. (Compared to fixed angle silent dynamic CG, it is really a dimensionality reduction blow)
I can only say that this is a very good game and I really like it, but unfortunately there is no Chinese. I can only use a translator to translate one by one, but it cannot stop my love for this game. Although I want to support this game, due to regional reasons, I am unable to support you, so I am very sorry.
releaseCommentsThere is a buddy below who comments on Yumiko's style, which everyone really likes, but she should only be a supporting role in the brothel. If she can design activities related to her, is it a free mode, giving Yumiko a home where she can go to her house to find her, so it doesn't affect the progress of the main story. Maybe it's because we all like double ponytails. How much has our sister updated her content? After 7 months of updating, how much is the 0.2 version content?
Thanks, this update cycle is really long, it would be nice if it was updated every 3 months. Will there be a sandbox mode in the game, which can increase the activity scenes of some supporting characters?
Update frequency depends on various factors like the quantity and quality of content. All developers work at their own pace. As for a 'sandbox mode,' such a feature is not currently planned. The progression of the storyline and relationships depends on your choices.
The modeling of Yumiko is so attractive.I hope she can have more plot. When to update the version 0.2. I hope to add the Chinese version.The machine translation can also be done.
Came for the lewds, got captivated by the story. Amazing animations as well! Finished the game already, so I can't wait to see the progress on this. Can't wait to spend some quality time with May ;) She's beautiful. When the time comes I'm hoping you'll do some extended scenes with lots of options with her :P
There will be a lot of H-scenes with each of the girls. I'm sure you'll enjoy what you can do with May in the future ;) Thank you very much for rating!
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I feel like the storyline is just starting but I can say this is one of the best VN I've ever played. All from animations to characters, it was different from others I've seen. The story is very interesting so far and I can't wait for the continuation of this. Some things can be improved like dialogues, but considering it as a developing game, It's very well done. If you don't mind asking, will this game be always free or maybe in the future you will add a payment to play it? If it will have, how much will it be?
I'm glad to hear that, thanks! This game will always be free.
I'll be quick and honest:
The animations were unexpected, smooth and surprisingly appealing, and they're top-notch, especially for a VN. I would've almost said I was watching a movie.
This brings me to my second point. It's very linear, more akin to a movie than a game. All the choices I have seen in 0.2 feel purely cosmetic, with very little to no impact on the story. If that's what you aim for, then there's no problem.
For the third point, I have to criticise the writing. The content, story and pieces of lore are very interesting, however, all immersion is broken by the phrasing of some lines. To be honest, some of them were painful to read. It was not really about orthography or grammar as much as it was about the structuring of sentences and expressions. If you're interested, I can look again when I have time and write down the worst ones.
The fourth and last point: characters. It's too soon to say whether they're good or bad, hollow or well-made, but their dialogues are... generally bad. Many lines are dry, many reactions are weird and many dialogues seem so emotionless, or full of fake emotion, that I wouldn't be surprised to see it was two AIs doing the talking.
The game is good and has much potential, but as with any game at the beginning of the road, it needs time, effort and polish.
For me the most immersion breaking dialogue is when the MC starts using "m'lady" talk, made worse when the other characters respond favorably to it. maximum cringe. I hope that isn't part of the dialogue you found off-putting, or i may pass on this entirely.
I'm sorry this spoiled your gaming experience. I'll be improving the game as much as possible. Please share what annoys you the most, and I'll fix it.
very cool
Thanks!
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加油！非常优秀的游戏，动态图的镜头运用得很不错，轻轻的呻吟声很加分，相信你到v0.7版本后游戏的排名和赞助都会很高的。
能不能增加人民币或港币的赞助途径，中国区都预测你的游戏会火。中文，韩文，俄文，翻译器能加上去更完美。
I hope so, thanks! Hong Kong Dollar is accepted on Patreon. Chinese and Russian will be in the next update. Other languages may be added later.
This is definitely one of the high quality AVN's out there, I really like your top-tier animations! Hoping to see more in the future! 😁
Thanks mate, I'm cooking the update. Stay tuned!
Will be waiting for v0.3 cuz I'm done playing v0.2
Hello author, after playing it, I think your game is great and I would be happy to provide Chinese translations for your subsequent updates.
This is the Chinese translation file for version 0.2. Because the game comes with font files that do not support Chinese, this translation currently lacks the specified font files..
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@Sabirow
A native Chinese speaker is currently translating the game, and the translation is almost ready. We will consider your option. Thank you so much for your offer!
作者可以回我一下吗，中国的网站被管控了我下载不了，可以加我好友传过来吗
When may sex scen?
It won't be soon, but you'll like it!
The download for Win with Google work?
If you have issues, try MEGA or PixelDrain.
Bro, even though it's still version 0.2 it already became one of the best avn for me. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.
Thank you! ^^
most well made web page for a game on here. extremely distinct. good job to whoever made it
Glad you liked it. Thank you
Love the overall story and the visuals are next level, but the dialogue ranges from OK at best to unbearable - typos, missing words, weird syntax, all of that really brings the experience down. In my opinion this should be your main focus going forward, as it's pretty much impossible for a game with poor english to get big.
Thanks. I will work on this.
Hi, when will the translation be in Russian??
Hello! In future updates.
спасибо
'69 SS. Tiny brain happ
Nah this AVN is different
This game is next-gen.
什么时候能出一下中文
In future updates. It will take some time for this.
什么时候更新0.3啊 迫不及待
I can't say for sure right now. Around 6-8 months.
好久呀，我以為 3-4 個月差不多了
Oh boy this avn is good, the fact that is almost 90% of animation is strange initially but after a while it's really enjoyable but i guess that's the motive of such long dev time :D
The story so far feel good, even if in some places the dialogues are a little ambigous. The LI are all pretty so far! GJ Dev!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
I like the models, the horror elements, and the scenes. It's pretty good so far, though my biggest gripe would be on the dialogue. A lot of it is unrealistic and strange, which takes away from me getting immersed in the plot. Still, it's pretty early on, so I think you can improve from here. Good job so far!
I will try to improve the current shortcomings. Thank you!
Is it possible to avoid prostitution in this update?
I will release a minor update with an avoid route in a while. Stay tuned!
I guess none of the whores is a LI.
They are side characters with whom you can engage.
You can tap 'Exit' after the first climax or wait for an update where you can choose not to visit this club.
I'm more in favor of waiting and not going to the brothel
The update where you can avoid it is now live btw
还没有更新吗
v0.2 available now, enjoy!
你有支付宝或者微信吗？我可以上面两个途径支持你
I'm grateful for your willingness to support me, but I don't use those methods.
这个游戏画质真好我记得以前刚玩的时候一个多g，可惜内容太少了，不到20分钟就完了不过，动画和画质是真的棒
I'm glad you liked it!
Is there Chinese in it?
Translation into Chinese is planned for future updates.
So when is the next update gonna release? It's been some time since the last update.
0.2 is available for patrons. Public release on Jan 27.
I loved the animated storytelling! It's a game with great potential. I wish you the future success!
Thank you!
Hi, can I ask why it will be impossible to have a relationship with yumiko?
She's a side character. You might see her again.
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Happy 2024, I have carefully studied your 0.11 work and would like to share some personal insights. I hope you can take a closer look when you have time, as it may inspire you.
① Story and plot of the game: If you have your own considerations for the game outline, it is not recommended (I hope there is more suspense or surprises in the plot, so that players have a feeling of remembering the updates in the following text)
② Image quality optimization: With watery eye expressions and red nipples, make sure to focus on details.
The focus is on the use of shots in dynamic images, such as close-up shots of characters stretching or shifting up and down in close range, especially in dynamic images. The use of shots with horizontal rotation and forward and backward translation in capturing dynamic images (as I have posted on the forum) Eternum The horizontally rotating camera in the pornographic animation showcases the female character's body shape, chest swaying trajectory, and hip swaying trajectory, with over a few hundred comments
③ An excellent pornographic game must have a soft moan and a soft panting voice over.
I hope your game can rank in the top ten after 0.6, come on! I think the game you made has the potential to become an excellent work!
The CG capture of dynamic images must have a gradient of horizontal rotation and stretching of the lens, as well as a moaning sound. (Compared to fixed angle silent dynamic CG, it is really a dimensionality reduction blow)
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机器翻译的，如果看不明白，请别介意！希望你能认真看看。
Machine translation, if you don't understand, please don't mind! I hope you can take a closer look.
Happy 2024! I will consider your advice. Thank you very much!
Can you add an option to remove may as a LI?
You can choose not to improve a relationship and skip all future H-scenes with her.
您有考虑加入简体中文吗
I plan to include machine translation in the future.
Igt imma wait for 2.0 then
I can only say that this is a very good game and I really like it, but unfortunately there is no Chinese. I can only use a translator to translate one by one, but it cannot stop my love for this game. Although I want to support this game, due to regional reasons, I am unable to support you, so I am very sorry.
I'm glad you enjoyed! I'll implement machine translation in future updates.
And another question is whether it is possible not to develop relations with May??
Sure, you're free to choose whom to improve relationships.
Привет, могу я спросить, почему отношения с Юмико невозможны? Она очень милая и красивая. Можете ли вы еще добавить отношения ?
Is there any other way to pay for this on Itch.io other then paypal? Could you add another payment method?
Unfortunately, there's no alternative payment method available at the moment. You can still download the game for free and enjoy it :)
Привет можно спросить когда выидет новая версия
releaseCommentsThere is a buddy below who comments on Yumiko's style, which everyone really likes, but she should only be a supporting role in the brothel. If she can design activities related to her, is it a free mode, giving Yumiko a home where she can go to her house to find her, so it doesn't affect the progress of the main story. Maybe it's because we all like double ponytails. How much has our sister updated her content? After 7 months of updating, how much is the 0.2 version content?
You'll see May again. That's all I can say. You can wait for public access and see everything for yourself :)
Thanks, this update cycle is really long, it would be nice if it was updated every 3 months. Will there be a sandbox mode in the game, which can increase the activity scenes of some supporting characters?
Update frequency depends on various factors like the quantity and quality of content. All developers work at their own pace. As for a 'sandbox mode,' such a feature is not currently planned. The progression of the storyline and relationships depends on your choices.
When will the next update be done,is it coming any time soon????
If not these month will it possible probably next month, curious to know?
I'm assuming it will be released in december
I'm hoping for the end of December. Development progress at 90%. Just a bit more to go.
The modeling of Yumiko is so attractive.I hope she can have more plot. When to update the version 0.2. I hope to add the Chinese version.The machine translation can also be done.
If there's more interest in Yumiko, I can create more events related to her. However, a relationship with her is not possible.
I plan to include machine translation to Chinese in future updates.
Came for the lewds, got captivated by the story. Amazing animations as well! Finished the game already, so I can't wait to see the progress on this. Can't wait to spend some quality time with May ;) She's beautiful. When the time comes I'm hoping you'll do some extended scenes with lots of options with her :P
There will be a lot of H-scenes with each of the girls. I'm sure you'll enjoy what you can do with May in the future ;) Thank you very much for rating!